mongo1984's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[SWAT Action]

out of ammo

When this happens, you have to wait for the baddies to kill you before the level ends. You need to change that; either with an automatic level end or reset, or a switch to a different weapon.

[Doll and Ball]

a little help

You need to release the LEFT mose button to grab the balls. the sound effects get a bit annoying after a while.

[Jetpack Jailbreak]

Novel concept for an upgrade game

The steering was a bit too squirrely, but still a fun little game.

[Car Game 2]

more levels

can't think of much else needed. like the music selection.

[oh child]

Good start

Aside from the obvious "improve the artwork" and "make it longer", I'd suggest making the cursor change from arrow to hand when it's over a clickable object. For a game this simple, it's not really necessary, but for more advanced games it can make things run much smoother.

darkmagewizard3 responds:

The cursor does change on my computer...

Thanks though...

[Clever Clover]

relaxing

nice, mellow game

[Boney Boom]

Nice concept, bad execution

On some of the levels, there's no way to advance to the end of the level.

Perraro responds:

The positioning of the bombs and obstacles are randomics.

[Halloween Champion 2]

Meh

The music's good, and it's aesthetically pleasing, but "keepy-uppy" games are just really boring unless you and yer friends are having a contest.

[Parkour Parkour Brooklyn]

What else can I say...

that others below haven't already. Great potential, see the five reviews below me for suggestions.

[Don't Shoot Me]

"Time-waster" is only worth so much...

Yes, it is a time-waster, but not much else. Like Ryanings said, the game needs upgrades, and some easier starter levels. There is definite potential with the game, if it just gets some TLC. Again: needs upgrades, easier levels, and maybe some larger print on the how-to portion; though that's not really needed to play the game.